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Tonight she holds you close
while she’s dreaming of him
in the darkness of your room,
silent. You find her beautiful,
talented, glowing,
effervescent. She sees herself as
damaged.
In reality, what she shows you is a
deception of her true self;
evil with a sick sense of
novelty in it.
Tonight, while you hold her close
in the darkness of your room,
tonight she is not thinking of
you.
while she’s dreaming of him
in the darkness of your room,
silent. You find her beautiful,
talented, glowing,
effervescent. She sees herself as
damaged.
In reality, what she shows you is a
deception of her true self;
evil with a sick sense of
novelty in it.
Tonight, while you hold her close
in the darkness of your room,
tonight she is not thinking of
you.
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Oooooh, that last line. Always with the gut punches.